Sela Locke

I'd really rather not nitpick, so instead, I'll give you my first impressions of your story. Okay, so first I was like, "AUGH GRAMMARPUNCTUATIONSPELLING!" And then I was like, "Augh! ...

I only read about half of the first paragraph, but I read the earlier chapters, so I have a little background to review this on. Ryder is this should-have-been-dead-a-long-time-ago-but-is-cursed-so-st

"it was his head that I didn't save Just this ONE thing I wanted to point out, Nu. I'd like this sentence better if his and I were italicized. The ...

I don't like nitpicking... so-o-o-o I'll just get right down to it. You start with a long, rather boring info-dump, four paragraphs long, to be exact. The waitresses and the ...

Sorry it's taken me so long! School and babysitting and whatnot. x-x; Nitpicks first - and be grateful, because I normally don't do them at all. ; ) Lying in ...

And personally I don't find it weird have them recapping what has happened to them. Okay, the above reviewers got pretty much everything down about the story, but I just ...

Hallo there! I was drawn in by the interesting title, and after I'd skimmed the story, I decided to go back and point out the things I'd noticed - and ...

This is... plagiarism. Read that through, people. This title, the concept, and these certain lyrics: Trapped in the hands of fate But they just turned out the light When morning ...

You asked for my opinion, and finally, here I am! ^_^ I can't be too long - right now I'm procrastinating, and the night grows no younger. But here it ...

I don't know where you plan to set this - what century, I mean. Because, even though it has the whole 'forced-marriage-ladies-in-waiting-nobility-kings etcetc,' the dialogue and narration reminds me o

Sex. That's it. It's like Twilight, except in Twilight it's not as obvious. It's you, being doted on and kissed and perfectly 'loved' by some really hot guy. There's not ...

I'm going to get right down to it: You're trying too hard. There's the rather more proper sound of eighteenth-century English, and then there's overdone purple prose. I'm sorry to ...

I did very, very much like it, but you've heard that a billion times, so here's my one nitpick: *Dumbledore stands there, wearing a bright, flashy pink robe* Dumbledore: Oh, ...

I don't believe this! Stephenie Meyer writes really well! I know everyone is entitiled to their own opinion but don't condemn her for writing about what veryone wants to hear! ...

Although it pains me to say it, I rather disagree with Pippie. If 'twas just a story about this being his second daughter, and his first had died on the ...